UC知道[11/16] |correct the mistakes in the composition|
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请挑出这九句的语法错误/
注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/
还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/
并改正/
............................................................................................ [1]Usually it's easy to get a great enthusiasm at the beginning.
[2]But it could hardly hold on to the last.
[3]At the beginning I have a perfect plan:To draw a comic in two months and publish it.
[4]I dreamed that I can get such a handsome sum by it.
[5]Then I started to draw.
[6]First I need a script for the comic.
[7]I thought out it.
[8]But a few days later,I overthrew the first script and made another one.
[9]However,I overthrew it too.
[10]I couldn't get satisfied with them.
[11]Drawing cover was also like this.
[12]Till now, I do nothing.
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注:[11]想表达的是:「画封面也像这样(总是不满意,画不下去)」
注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/
还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/
并改正/
............................................................................................ [1]Usually it's easy to get a great enthusiasm at the beginning.
[2]But it could hardly hold on to the last.
[3]At the beginning I have a perfect plan:To draw a comic in two months and publish it.
[4]I dreamed that I can get such a handsome sum by it.
[5]Then I started to draw.
[6]First I need a script for the comic.
[7]I thought out it.
[8]But a few days later,I overthrew the first script and made another one.
[9]However,I overthrew it too.
[10]I couldn't get satisfied with them.
[11]Drawing cover was also like this.
[12]Till now, I do nothing.
............................................................................................
注:[11]想表达的是:「画封面也像这样(总是不满意,画不下去)」
1. a 去掉,因为enthusiasm不可数
2. hardly 后面加 be, 因为是被动
3 To去掉 没必要 而且和and后面不平衡
4.can 改成could(不知道对不)
5.√
6.√
7.it out
8.√
9.√
10.√
11.要么在cover前+个a 要么写成covers, 是可数的
12.do 改成did 比较好 或者用完成时haven't done anything
鉴定完毕,不知道正确不